PT2 Rough Edit Feedback

Teacher Feedback:

Things that worked well:

• Nice fades over establishing shots
• She liked the echo effect of the voices

Things that need work:

• The titles need attention
• The audio needs to be louder - the voices were hard to hear at times during moments of dialogue
• The build up to the jump off the bridge needed to be more impactful, and the suspense needs to be built up more (whether it be closer shots or audio changes)

Peer Feedback:

Things that worked well:

• Nice establishing shots
• Nice fades between shots
• Good actors
• Music in background was fitting for the video

Things that need work:

• The shots might be too quick
• The end credits need work (they were too quick)