Mirror, Mirror PT1
Mirror, Mirror
Feedback:
Peer feedback:
Kevin gave me the idea to add in an eerie creaking sound effect of the door opening and closing during the bathroom scene. I chose to go along with this, as it adds in an element of suspense that portrays that of a thriller genre.
Despite this, for the final edit I intend on fading this sound effect sooner (Feedback given by Teacher Bianca). It lingers too long and I'm not happy with how this effect turned out.
Porcia gave the response that I could add a bit more suspense to the beginning of the music when the title appears on screen. However, I have made the decision to disregard this as I like the music how it is. Additionally, changing the music would interfere with the soundtrack for the rest of the film and this would have to change entirely as it is from the same audio feed,
Many people who viewed my short film agreed that they liked my transitions throughout the video and how it switched between black and white, which is representative of the past failures, and the original colour, which illustrates his current reality.
There is one part which I believe needs to be re-edited which is the scene where Kevin pushes over Carol, successfully taking out his target. The transition here is messy and I don't like how it turned out as much as I thought it would.
Teacher Feedback:
Once I posted it on youtube, Teacher Bianca gave further advice and feedback. She suggested moving the title alignment to center it, as it currently looks a bit empty with the black background. I agree with her on this, and will add this update in my final edit.
Additionally, as mentioned earlier, Teacher Bianca said to cut the door creaking sound effect earlier, which I have done prior to posting it on youtube.
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