- Create a page with notes for what you'd write in an essay, commenting on how the 4 technical areas are used to create meaning - Write down what you think the 'big ideas' are in terms of who is being represented & how - think about the idea of 'stereotypes' and how those traditional stereotypes are either challenged or conformed to. Camera: Shot reverse shot (we see the dialogue and their reactions/facial expressions) Close ups -shows facial expressions Handheld , POV Camera angles are important in creating meaning Tension shown between Cheryl and Betty (seen through body language, glances, rolling eyes) When Cheryl is coming closer and Archie notices, the camera shots show his facial expressions which indicate he doesn't want to be near her, further emphasized when he leaves just as she arrives. Mise-en-scene: In mufti clothes Archie is wearing a football jacket (jock) Cheryl's skirt matches her hair Pink makes Betty look innocent Girl with darker f...
Hi Brianna
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Some great aspects to this idea, the shots are great and the effects you've added work well. Overall, you have done well to recreate the thriller genre codes and conventions in your opening sequence. With some more practise, your editing style will become more sophisticated and transitions and sequences more seamless. Considering you have only had a few months to learn the technology, this is a great attempt.
Points for consideration:
- shots of the trees are great and add an effective element to the tone and feel of your film
- great use of shadows and concealment / darkness
- use of vulnerable characters is effective
- credits popping up work well - fonts are important as they really add to a look and feel of a film. Potentially a more sinister/ scary font for your credits and title could have really added another layer of suspense to your film
- music would have been good to have 'changed gears' for intensity at key moments, mainly at the end when one of the girls get taken
- credits at the end are usually spaced out and scroll in line with usual movie conventions